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Giới thiệu (5 điểm): định nghĩa + nguyên nhân

Diễn tiến và phân loại(12 điểm):
--- Lấy được toàn bộ ý mà đề bài cho (3 điểm)
--- Thêm từ vựng và các mẫu câu trong tư liệu đã phát (7 điểm)
--- Dùng câu ghép và câu phức (2 điểm)

Kết luận (5 điểm)

Ý kiến riêng của bản thân về căn bệnh (3 điểm)





Nghe có vẻ rườm rà nhưng thật ra cũng không khó là bao, Bảo nghĩ là vài mẹo nhỏ sau đây sẽ giúp được các bạn:

Phần bắt buộc: các bạn cứ học thuộc vài mẫu câu đơn giản, tới khi cần chỉ việc moi ra mà dùng trong tích tắc:
--- định nghĩa: (tên bệnh) is known as (định nghĩa đề cho)
--- nguyên nhân: The causes of this problem are (nguyên nhân đề cho)
--- diễn tiến: dễ tạo câu ghép (and, or, but, so) và câu phức (if, that, which) nhất; nhớ là thường các thầy cô đã để sẵn mọi triệu chứng theo thứ tự nên mình chỉ thêm các trạng từ đầu câu (firstly, secondly, then, next, later, at the same time, at last); thêm thắt modal verb (can’t, unlikely, can, may, likely, must, certainly) cho màu mè và có lẽ phải học thuộc từ tư liệu để biết cách dùng
--- phân loại: (tên bệnh) is sorted/divided into (nhóm bệnh đề cho)

Phần kết luận: dễ nhất là “vấn đề này có thể trị hết bằng những phương pháp phù hợp nên chúng ta cần tìm đến bệnh viện thật sớm khi vừa phát hiện những triệu chứng nêu trên để tránh những biến chứng không mong muốn” (This problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should come to the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications)

Phần ý kiến riêng: thường chúng ta sẽ quăng bom trong phần triệu chứng hoặc phân loại rằng “1 triệu chứng nào đó là khủng khiếp nhất”, “hầu hết bệnh nhân đều than về”, “đây là nhóm nguy hiểm nhất vì ít phương pháp chữa hoặc chữa không hết được”…
--- (1 triệu chứng đề cho) is the worst for anyone to stand/bear/tolerate because (ý kiến riêng bản thân, bùm bùm bùm)
--- Most patients complain about (1 triệu chứng đề cho) because it has terrible effects on every daily work/job.
--- (nhóm bệnh đề cho) is the most dangerous group because of the lack in appropriate treatments/ because it cannot be cured completely/ because the patients have to live with it for the rest of their lives…

ANAEMIA


Anaemia is known as a reduction in haemoglobin of blood. The causes of this problem are loss of blood, deficiency in production and breakdown of red cells. Having anaemia, the patients may feel giddy, increasingly weak and tired. They likely are short of breath especially after effort and at the end of the day, which is the worst because it has terrible effects on every daily life and work. At the same time, they can also encounter faintness, drowsiness, restlessness, and insomnia. Checking in a hospital, the doctor usually sees his patients a little pale and notices their tachycardia. Anaemia is sorted into three groups. The first one is deficiency anaemia and it is divided into two cases whether there is a lack of iron or vitamin B12 and folic acid. The second one is hypoplastic anaemia but it is commonly known as aplastic anaemia. The third one is haemolitic anaemia and it includes the intravascular and extravascular type. In a word, this problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should come to the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications.




Các từ diễn tả TCCN bệnh nhân có: be, have, feel, complain about, encounter,…
Các từ diễn tả TCTT bác sĩ thấy được: see, notice, witness, concern about, find out,…
Trước câu kết nên có: in a word, in conclusion, in the end, finally,…

LEUKAEMIA



Leukaemia is known as a neoplastic proliferation of white blood cells, either acute or chronic. Up to nowadays, the causes of this problem have not been assured / have stayed unknown. Having leukaemia, the patients are all very ill and certainly have high fever. Then, they may have not only loss of weight, energy and strength but also increasing tiredness. However, they unlikely complain about any bleeding from the mouth, gum and nose. Checking in a hospital, the doctor can notice enlargement of the tonsils, lymph nodes and spleen. In addition, the examinations can show a severe anaemia which usually appears in many late cases and is the worst for anyone to tolerate because it has a lot of terrible effects on every daily life and work. In conclusion, this problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should come to the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications.




Các từ diễn tả CLS chỉ ra được: show, indicate, represent, point out…

Các bạn nên nhớ rằng thầy cô ở đây chú ý nhiều đến từ vựng và ngữ pháp chứ không chú quá kỹ đến nội dung mình “bùm bùm” thêm. Nhưng, các bạn cũng nên nổ quá đà như nói “ung thư ác tính giai đoạn cuối có thể được chữa khỏi hoàn toàn” là được.
Chú ý: sai chính tả bị trừ điểm rất nặng!!!

MEASLES



Measles is known as a highly contagious acute disease. The cause of this problem is virus infection. Firstly, there is a 7-14 day incubation period when the child may have fever, coryza, hacking and conjunctivitis. After that, he unlikely has small white-headed spots, named Koplik’s spots, on the mucous membrane of the mouth beside the molar teeth. Those spots will disappear when rash comes out usually on the fourth day of illness, starts in front and below the ears, secondly comes to the forehead and neck then finally spreads all over the face and body. The rash which is a dusky red patchy eruption must fade within a few days during which the kid may also suffer from high temperature. The worst of this disease is nothing mentioned above but the complications such as encephalitis, progressive parancephalitis, bronchopneumonia, conjunctivitis, otitis media, mastoiditis, and stomatitis. They can worsen the situation and threaten the kid’s life. In a word, this problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should have our kids at the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications.

MALARIA



Malaria is known as a protozoan infection characterized by chills, fever, sweating and anaemia. The cause of this problem is parasites of four types: Plasmodium vivax, Plasmodium falciparum, Plasmodium malariae, Plasmodium ovale. Having malaria, the patient may firstly have chilly sensation which is an early symptom and varies in intensity and intervals. Secondly, a general malaise with high temperature can appear along with profuse sweating, headaches, vomiting, and weakness. After checking in a hospital, the doctor likely notices that the amount of lymphocytes and monocytes has increased. If the patient doesn’t have his disease treated properly, there will be complications such as cerebal haemorrhage, acute tubular necrosis, cardiac shock, acute haemolitic anemia, and spleen rupture. In conclusion, this problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should come to the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications.

PHARYNGITIS



Pharyngitis is also known as a sore throat, the most common throat problem which can be either acute or chronic in nature. The cause of this disease can be cytomegalovirus, respiratory syncytial virus, or herpes simplex virus. In addition, the reservoir is considered to be a source spreading this problem among humans. Having pharyngitis, the patient may have a 1-4 day incubation period during which a sore throat with abrupt beginning takes place. Secondly, there can be a frequent urge to swallow and mild fever. These are the worst symptoms for any people to tolerate because they will lose their appetite and barely concentrate on their works. Checking in a hospital, a doctor is able to notice his patient’s enlarged lymph nodes and generalized redness of the throat. In conclusion, this problem can be cured completely with the right treatments, so we should come to the hospital as soon as we find out any sign mentioned above to avoid unwanted complications.